*Flexes* Alright, so I'm going to go through these one by one and nitpick, be forewarned. *Cracks knuckles* Lets get it on.
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Originally Posted by johncootrane Well Its the end of my school year so I thought I would post a few of my photos. All of these were taken on my 35 mm black and white and were produced in my schools dark room using different tequniques... I have 19 right now but I might update later with a few others... Not sure if I should put them on my dA yet... You tell me =P |
Decent. I would like this photo HOWEVER the general... composition is off. It should abide by the rule of thirds ideally, look it up if you don't know what it is.
Much to slanted, should have toned it back 10-15 degrees at minimum. Again, rule of thirds, the camera should have been shifted to move the house to the right and show more the of the tree, if you know what rule of thirds is you'll know what I mean.
No focus, nothing catches the eye. Completely bland. Horrible.
Decent, although an attempt at making the picture at least slightly more symmetrical would have been good.
Rule of thirds yet again. Shift the camera to the left, make the left edge of the bush line up with the 1/3 mark. Would make the picture 100x better. ATM its incredibly bland and uninteresting.
It feels like a picture of nothing, not much to say. Really not sure what your trying to capture.
Rule of thirds would make this the best picture you have.
Bland bland bland bland bland. Should have made a focus somewhere, a crow, the tree, SOMETHING.
its alright, not much I can see in the way of improvement, its just not a great photo.
Kids ugly, zoom in more, cut out backround noise. Kid being ugly is probably unworkable, but the others should be done : p.
Boring. Not much else to say.
See above, but you could have done more with the train.
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I'm glad you do, its decent. Shift the camera slightly to the left (Ie picture moves tot he right) to slide it in line with the rule of thirds, and your golden.
My two cents. Learn rule of thirds / more interesting compositions.
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