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I don't really like the lighting. The depth could use work as well. There's no solid focal either. There's some cool effects in there though. Nice work.

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Thanks my only concern was the lack of a focal point. So, I moved the text closer to the orange spot at the top to try to make that the focal point. And I try so damn hard to have depth it just never comes out.

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You have definitely improved. Thumbs up.

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I can tell you tried blurring, but you can't just blur something and hope it makes depth. Light and dark spots, sharpening and blurring, burn and dodge tool, and making similar objects small and big all can help to create better depth.

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The tut here has a good part on focals. It's under compostion.

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Wow, that's a very interesting tutorial. Nice find.

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Bump.

Added a second one.

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For me the text sticks out to much. Try typeing your text. Image> Image Apply. Clip that layer to the text layer and move the image applied layer.

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The second one came out much better. I really like the lighting, color, and the focal point that you established.

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